So I have committed to teaching myself Haiku for January and composing each day(so yeah , I’m behind). Here are my learners attempts.
blue summer twilight
a tawny silhouette bobs
-predators' eyes meet.
blue banded bee floats
over agapanthus bloom -
a pause in the dance
Curiously I have only just now noticed the predominance of the colour blue. The first I am not entirely happy with and wonder if I should swap predators’ for hunters’. The second I think is better and Blue banded bees are awesome.
H/T to Jennifer Mills whose picture of a Blue Banded bee got my out of the house and smelling the Agapanthus