Day3 Post It Note Poetry

Thank goodness it's Friday,  half the day went to pot due to network issues.  But still, it my frazzled state I came up with this after looking at some inspiring artwork.

Wanted to write it as a monostich:

eating  twilight  shadows  in  the  koi  pond

Now I am not sure if the post it note version looks better.

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