Post It Note Poetry Day 9

Struggling in the heat.

woke late  -  
                stopped rendering

the walls  
            of  
                         myself


Possibly tried to do too much with this one. Played with tenses to try and generate a matter of fact, brief, diary entry tone and then contrast that with a philosophical ending.   Not sure if it works. I do like the multiple interpretations of rendering though.



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