Post-it note poetry Day 2
Okay it’s day two and I have already had to gag my inner editor/critic/sadistic bastard with regards to this Haiku, which is or isn’t a haiku depending on which rules you use. It’s based on an experience I had while walking ie the falling star exploding with an intense flash and then I have gone and included a rather depressing metaphor (another no-no in some haiku quarters) of inspiration. There’s no seasonal word but in this poem I was concentrating more on fragment and phrase theory. It comes to a nice 12 syllables though. Let me know what you think.
dies in blinding flash