Post-it note poetry Day 2

Okay it’s day two and I have already had to gag my inner editor/critic/sadistic bastard with regards to this Haiku, which is or isn’t a haiku depending on which rules you use.  It’s based on an experience I had while walking ie the falling star exploding with an intense flash and then I have gone and included a rather depressing metaphor (another no-no in some haiku quarters) of inspiration.  There’s no seasonal word but in this poem I was concentrating more on fragment and phrase theory.  It comes to a nice 12 syllables though.  Let me know what you think.

 

…fallen star

dies in blinding flash

inspiration